2 Part Question

1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?

        I’ve got comments for my blog postings from many other students, and learned several things from that comments. Most of all, I could check errors of my writings. Most comments were about what is wrong about my paragraph. They told me how to change it, and I could fix my wrong things. Second, I felt confidence with my paragraphs. Not only students told me what to change, but also did they tell my paragraphs were good. That made me feel confident of my writings. Lastly, I also felt gratitude for reading and correcting my writings. I know this is for assignments, but it surely did take some time to do reading and correcting. I am really thank for that.

2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?

     

     Commenting on other students’ blogs taught me three things. First, I learned to write paragraphs in different ways. I always wrote paragraphs in the same way, but reading others’ let me realize that there are many ways to write paragraphs. Second, I developed a sense of responsibility. The thought that writers of paragraphs will read my comments, and apply my opinion to their final drafts, led me to have responsibility when commenting on paragraphs. Third, I learned to read carefully and analyze the paragraph. The reason is somehow the same with how come I got to develop the responsibility. My comments need to be helpful for writers, then I have to understand what they are talking about perfectly. That is why I learned to focus on the paragraph.