2015년 10월 31일 토요일

2 Part Question

1) What has the comments others have posted on my blog taught me about my own writing?

        I’ve got comments for my blog postings from many other students, and learned several things from that comments. Most of all, I could check errors of my writings. Most comments were about what is wrong about my paragraph. They told me how to change it, and I could fix my wrong things. Second, I felt confidence with my paragraphs. Not only students told me what to change, but also did they tell my paragraphs were good. That made me feel confident of my writings. Lastly, I also felt gratitude for reading and correcting my writings. I know this is for assignments, but it surely did take some time to do reading and correcting. I am really thank for that.

2) What have the comments I have posted on other blogs taught me about writing?
     
     Commenting on other students’ blogs taught me three things. First, I learned to write paragraphs in different ways. I always wrote paragraphs in the same way, but reading others’ let me realize that there are many ways to write paragraphs. Second, I developed a sense of responsibility. The thought that writers of paragraphs will read my comments, and apply my opinion to their final drafts, led me to have responsibility when commenting on paragraphs. Third, I learned to read carefully and analyze the paragraph. The reason is somehow the same with how come I got to develop the responsibility. My comments need to be helpful for writers, then I have to understand what they are talking about perfectly. That is why I learned to focus on the paragraph.

2015년 10월 10일 토요일

3 Reasons Why I like Hote&Tourism Management Cafe










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Jaewon Lee


Oct 10, 2015

 

Hotel & Tourism Management Café

 

Hotel & Tourism Management Café, as known as HTM Café, was established by Sejong Hotel & Tourism Management University last year. It is located in 5th floor of Gwanggaeto building, and it is open to everyone. My friends and I are huge fans of HTM Café, and we defined this place as the most comfortable place to be, and there are three reasons for that. (Well, I meant the most comfortable place just for us, not for everyone.)

First of all, everything HTM Café is offering is at reasonable price. We can pay as much as we want, and paid money is donated. Even though we got to choose how much to pay, we have to pay at least \2000 per each food. Low price makes us to visit often and lessens burden of paying money.

Second, there are variety foods and beverages. For beverages, there are two types exist; non-coffee and coffee drinks. There are also fruits, breads, and cookies. Many kinds of foods and drinks let us to be in a happy decision time, and we can eat and drink them as meals.

Third, HTM Café is large. There are many desks and chairs, so we do not have to go outside with our coffees. There is another room with more desks next door, and that large space lets us to stay long freely. What I like the most is that we can stay there without buying food! No one throws us out.

Hotel & Tourism Management Café’s reasonable price, variety of food and drinks, and large space made my friends and I to choose this place as the most comfortable café for us. I hope many other people visit here because drinks and food are delicious, and most of all, it is open to everybody!








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